ARC Review – Mask of Shadows

ARC Review – Mask of ShadowsMask of Shadows by Linsey Miller
Series: Untitled #1
Published by Sourcebooks Fire on August 29th 2017
Genres: Fantasy, Young Adult Fiction
Pages: 352
Source: Netgalley

FTC Disclosure: I received a complimentary copy of this book from the publisher via Netgalley. All opinions are my own.


Sallot Leon, the protagonist in Linsey Miller’s Mask of Shadows, is out for revenge.  Sal is the sole survivor of the territory of Nacea.  Nacea and all of its people were destroyed when the land of Erlend started a Civil War with the land of Alona.  Erlend was supposed to protect Nacea but when mysterious and deadly shadows were unleashed during the war, the Erlend lords chose to abandon Nacea and retreat to safety.  Completely alone and forced to live as a thief in order to survive, Sal is determined to make those Erlend lords pay for what they did to Nacea.

When Sal steals a poster advertising a contest to become Opal, one of the Queen’s group of elite assassins, it sounds like the perfect way to gain access to the lords and thus begin seeking revenge.  There’s just one catch – the competition to become Opal is basically a fight to the death, the last one alive wins.  So Sal’s plan is ultimately to get revenge or die trying.



I’d have to say that Sal is definitely my favorite part of the novel. They are charming, witty, and extremely resourceful.  Sal is also the classic underdog in this competition because the majority of the competitors are heavily trained in combat and other lethal skills, whereas Sal is used to getting by on their street smarts.

You’ll also notice my use of ‘they’ as I’m referring to Sal.  Sal is a gender fluid protagonist, and in most cases is referred to as they, although Sal indicates that what gender pronouns are used should be dictated by what type of clothing is being worn. If Sal is wearing a dress, for example, using ‘she’ is perfectly acceptable.  I had never read a book with a gender fluid character in it before so this made for a unique read.  I don’t know much at all about gender fluidity but I thought Miller did a very nice job portraying it here.  I also liked that it was incorporated smoothly into the overall story and didn’t overshadow other plot points.  A few characters inquired about it in terms of how to address Sal, but otherwise they accepted it without question and moved on. It wasn’t treated as an oddity.

Another aspect of Mask of Shadows I enjoyed was the competition itself.  Yes, it was reminiscent of The Hunger Games, but it was still an exciting, action-packed part of the book regardless.  The rules were basically to kill as many of your fellow competitors as possible, but do so without being caught.  Since the competition is to become one of the Queen’s assassins, stealth is one of the most important qualities needed.  Miller does a fantastic job of building plenty of tension and suspense as the reader follows Sal through the competition, playing this ultra-intense kill-or-be-killed game, never knowing when a potential assassin might be hiding around any corner, or up in any tree, looking for the perfect opportunity to take them out. One distinct difference between this competition and The Hunger Games was that all of the competitors were referred to by numbers and wore numbered masks over their faces at all times.  They were only referred to by their numbers, which added an almost-dehumanizing element to the competition. I had mixed feelings about the masks because there were a few competitors I would have liked to know more about, but it was hard to connect with any of them since they were just faceless numbers.

Also somewhat reminiscent of The Hunger Games, but in a good way (for me anyway) is that each competitor is assigned a servant to help them dress, bathe, ensure they have safe, non-poisoned food to eat each day.  Sal’s servant, Maud, was one of my favorite characters in the book.  She’s not allowed to give Sal any kind of advantage during the competition, but behind the scenes, she is hard core in Sal’s corner.  Why?  Because if Sal wins, Maud gets a reward and a huge promotion.  So she’s very excited each day that Sal doesn’t die.  She’s sassy too, so she adds a much-welcomed element of lightheartedness in the middle of what is otherwise just scene after scene of murders and attempted murders.


My biggest issues with Mask of Shadows had to do with pacing, which was slow at times, especially when the author was detailing Sal’s backstory and the reasons why they wanted to become one of the Queen’s assassins.  I lost interest a few times along the way and only came away with a vague notion of what the world of Mask of Shadows entailed so I would have loved more world building, but without it being in the form of info dumps.

I also had issues with the romance, which I found to be out of place and unfortunately distracting from the main storyline.  Although I thought Sal and Elise had a lot of chemistry when they first met (while Sal was robbing Elise), as the story went on and they are reunited as part of the competition, I preferred them  as teacher and student rather than romantic partners.

Overall, I think more action-packed competition scenes and little or no romance would have better served Mask of Shadows.


While I did have some issues with it, overall I still enjoyed reading Mask of Shadows.  While parts of the storyline are in some ways reminiscent of The Hunger Games, the similarities did not bother me because there are still enough differences to make it a unique and entertaining read.


Thanks so much to Netgalley, Linsey Miller, and Sourcebooks Fire for allowing me to preview this book.  This in no way shapes my opinion of the book being reviewed.


Sallot Leon is a thief, and a good one at that. But gender fluid Sal wants nothing more than to escape the drudgery of life as a highway robber and get closer to the upper-class and the nobles who destroyed their home. 

When Sal Leon steals a poster announcing open auditions for the Left Hand, a powerful collection of the Queen’s personal assassins named for the rings she wears — Ruby, Emerald, Amethyst, and Opal — their world changes. They know it’s a chance for a new life.

Except the audition is a fight to the death filled with clever circus acrobats, lethal apothecaries, and vicious ex-soldiers. A childhood as a common criminal hardly prepared Sal for the trials. But Sal must survive to put their real reason for auditioning into play: revenge. 


About Linsey Miller

A wayward biology student from Arkansas, Linsey has previously worked as a crime lab intern, neuroscience lab assistant, and pharmacy technician. She is currently an MFA candidate represented by Rachel Brooks of Bookends Literary. Her debut novel MASK OF SHADOWS is the first in a fantasy duology coming in August 2017 from Sourcebooks Fire. She can be found writing about science and magic anywhere there is coffee.

14 replies
  1. Angela
    Angela says:

    The gender-fluid main character is definitely not something I’ve come across before. It sounds interesting, though. I like that there are so many elements to this story – the competition and the moments of wit from Maud – but yeah, it sounds like it could have done without the romance completely. Great review!

    • Suzanne
      Suzanne says:

      Yeah, there were so many other exciting things going on that the romance just seemed to clutter things up for me. Still a solid read overall though.

  2. Wendy @ Birdie Bookworm
    Wendy @ Birdie Bookworm says:

    I love the idea of a gender fluid main character, which is what originally interested me. I’ve just heard so many people say the pacing was off, and it made me push the book back for now.

    • Suzanne
      Suzanne says:

      The pacing was definitely causing issues for me. It was just so inconsistent. It is an interesting story so I’m hoping that now that most of the backstory has been dropped in the first book, the second book will be more consistently paced.

  3. Bookworm
    Bookworm says:

    Sals character sounds really interesting. It’s refreshing to see a diverse character like that. Overall this sounds like a good read, thanks for sharing!

  4. Resh
    Resh says:

    Glad you enjoyed the read. Sorry about the pacing but glad that it worked okay for you. It does seem very similar to Hunger Games

    • Suzanne
      Suzanne says:

      Thanks! I’m hoping the second book in the series will be much stronger, since all of that backstory is now out of the way.

  5. sydneyeditor1
    sydneyeditor1 says:

    All your “Likes” spoke to meeeeee so much! … but pacing is a big issue for me. Hm. It sounds like Sal’s backstory should probably have been cut down?

    • Suzanne
      Suzanne says:

      Yeah, the pacing was probably the biggest downfall. I think either the backstory should have been trimmed or else just better worked into the novel so it didn’t feel like a history lesson dropped into the middle of a novel. I am hopeful for the second book though since all of that backstory is now out of the way.

  6. Di @ Book Reviews by Di
    Di @ Book Reviews by Di says:

    Oh yay! I’m glad to see you liked this one and we pretty much had the same rating!

    I actually didn’t have a problem with the numbers system the way a lot of people seem to – I thought it was a good challenge for the author to be able to distinguish for example between Four and Five and they both had very distinct personalities to me and I was easily able to differentiate between the more important secondary characters.

    I too really loved Maud – and now you’re reminding me I didn’t mention her at all in my review. 🙂

    There was definitely some work to be done on the world building and keeping the reader informed without losing them in the process of the plot, but I think it was such a promising debut and I can’t wait to read more! 🙂

    Lovely review and I loved seeing your thoughts.

    • Suzanne
      Suzanne says:

      Yay, glad you liked it overall too. I’m really hoping that since so much of the backstory was dealt with in the first book, the next book will be much better.

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